Kia ora.
We are learning how to add description to our writing by including ideas from our senses and creating Show not Tell sentences. We made popcorn in class and got to hear, smell, touch, see and taste it.
The popcorn was popping in the bag, Pop! Pop! Pop! The air was nice and buttery and it made my mouth water. The bag was boiling as if it was lava getting ready to explode. Hot! Hot! Hot! I put it in my mouth Yum! Yum! Yum! 
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