KIA Ora today we are doing a 5 senses writing but we only had to do three mine were hearing, Touch and sight hope you like it please check out my friends blog there names are T.A, Toby Cyrus, Rico and Max.
The Ice Devil's Driveway
The air felt like an ice devil was here. Dead trees went all the way down the driveway into the bush. Screeches of pain came from the distance.The black branches rattled.
Kia ora Jayden,
ReplyDeleteYou paint a very eerie picture with your description - I don't think I'd like to go there! Wonder what kind of house the Ice Devil lives in at the end of that driveway??
Miss M
Thanks miss mentor. oo
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