Kia ora.
We are learning how to add description to our writing by including ideas from our senses and creating Show not Tell sentences.
The Skittles were shaking in the bag. The air smelled nice and fruity and it made my mouth water. The water was as warm as if it had come out of a hot water bottle. I put a Skittle in my mouth. Yum! Yum! Yum!
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