Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning how to put metaphors and similes into our work. Similes are another way to get more points in sentences structure. A similes is were you use, as, like and than.
Ka kite ano
Matauri Bay
Snoring. Headache. What a bad day! It was the 2nd of January. Mun ran into Royston’s, Nakita’s and my room as fast as a panther. “Get into the car, we are going to pick up Max Penney!” Mum yelled.
“We’re here!” Mum said, beeping her horn to say good morning. I knocked on Max’s door like I was a pigeon pecking on wood. Max got his stuff and ran to the car.
Naaaaa! The annoying motor was a rude kid as we pulled into our driveway.Then we went and got the crusty caravan and shot out to Matauri Bay. After Max, Royston and I had set up our tent, we had to help set up the caravan. When we finish we ran to the beach. We dived in. We were penguins. We had so much fun it was unreal.
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Another great piece of writing which met all the success criteria. I really liked the sentence about you knocking on Max's door like a pigeon.
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