Flight to Palmerston North
Yyyy! I woke up. “Yay we’re going to Palmerston North” I yawned. We zoomed to the cool as airport. I got two lollies for me and one for Royston. We sadly waved to mum, mousey and dad as we slithered to the airplane and took off into the big air and headed for Auckland. We waited at the airport for 1 hour and 35 minutes. Finally it was time to go. “Yay”!!! I whispered. We walked through the tunnel and onto the airplane. Zoom! Off we took into the bright blue sky. We were bound for Palmerston North.
This is a great story Jayden. I like how you are using hook ins and interesting words. Try to make sure you choose words that match your story ... Did you slither to the plane or did you trudge?
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